TG Captions are one of my favorite forms of storytelling. There is no narrative fluff, no extraneous details, just the hook, the twist, and the climax.
I promised Dee a hospital-themed caption this week, but all I could find was sexy nurses, so I had to find a way to sort of flip the conversation, to put her off-screen but still make her transformation clear.
It ended up a little dark and edgy, definitely tricky and kind of sinister . . . but all with the empty-headed promise of a happy future. I struggled to give her one last cute line, but it felt too neat, too tidy, so I just left it with that veiled threat (or happy promise - you choose) that this is forever...
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