TG Captions are one of my favorite forms of storytelling. There is no narrative fluff, no extraneous details, just the hook, the twist, and the climax.
Another set of trade captions from Rachel's Haven this weekend, this last one for JaySeaver.
This one started with a pair of Jay's flavors of the day, mainly a mind transfer has her meeting her (unaware) original self and somehow winding up in the body of her best friend's wife. I missed the mark a bit in regards to the new bride being the one unaware, but that's where my muse - and hubby's anxious, panicked, hurried look - led me.
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