There is a strong theme of female domination here, with three different women who demonstrate their power in different ways, and a very lucky young man who gets to enjoy giving up all control. As kinky as the premise is, what really shines here is the affection of the characters and the sensuality between them. Archer Tinto really knows how to build a scene and how to connect readers with characters.
Small, sensual acts like foot rubs, massages, and nipple play give way to bigger, bolder acts of forced feminization, facesitting, and intercourse. The dialogue is just wonderful, making it easy for us to get to know them. It would seem like the reveal of true intentions would be the climax (no pun intended), but there is still more story to come (that pun was intended).
A fun story with the door left open for more.
I've loved reading since I was a kid. I’ve been writing intermittently for years, and I finally decided to polish off some stories and toss them out to readers to see what you think? So far, they are all in the sensual erotica realm, with eight published. But I’m working on a much more complex novel. I love feedback and constructive critique from readers, and I love learning, and discussion with other writers and readers.
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Sally a super review hun.
ReplyDeleteEveryone says there is more story to tell, interesting that it leaves readers wanting
Guess that's a good story