Feminized Fiancé by Ann Michelle (#femdom #feminization)

The mother who believes that no man could be good enough for her daughter is one of the oldest tropes in fiction, but it works particularly well in erotic fiction. That kind of woman is just naturally dominant, and her maternal instincts make for an effective motivation. Of course, some women push things too far, and that is where we - as readers - really get excited.

Victoria Martin is one of those women, and Feminized Fiancé is one of those stories. She is controlling and manipulative, a woman who will do anything to protect her family's legacy. In this case, having shipped her daughter off to Switzerland for three months, 'anything' means destroying the man who plans to marry her.

While the initial set-up may be a little contrived, with Rick not only having never met his wife's mother, but not even recognizing the family name of his new boss, their relationship makes for a fantastic read. It is all to easy to understand her motives, even if her methods are suspect, and he is entirely believable in his desperation to go along with her schemes. He demonstrates just the right mix of reluctance and innocence, a young man who is completely overwhelmed by a weird situation that continues to spiral out of control.

This is a story that is heavy on the feminization, and those details are absolutely delightful. Victoria trusts her would-be son-in-law into the hands of a small team of professionals who know precisely how to make him look, act, and feel like a submissive girl. If he were a willing participant, the situation would actually be a wildly intense fantasy come true (especially with the injections, the outfits, and the forced masturbation), but for him it is a nightmare inside which is trapped. He does come to enjoy aspects of it, luxuriating in the erotic submission, but it is a guilty kind of pleasure.

The characters make the story come alive, driving us towards a cliffhanger finale that will have your heart in your throat, waiting for the inevitable confrontation . . . but then Ann Michelle throws in a twist, promising to double-down on that tension with Serving His Fiancée.

When I was young, there wasn't much TV/TG fiction, and often, what I found had little to do with feminization or just wasn’t very interesting. So I started writing my own stories. Now I’ve decided to share those stories with you. My goal is to provide you with high-quality, creative, interesting, and exciting stories. I hope you love these stories as much as I do.

http://annemichellesworld.blogspot.com

Reviewed by Sally