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Meh. This was about as run-of-the-mill as sissy cuckold fantasies can get. It feels like M.L. Patricks started writing a story about a couple already experienced with cuckolding, and then decided to make it about their first time, but put no effort into setting it up. Cuckolding a Total Sissy was an okay bit of fluff, but just too thin, just too shallow.
I think what the story lacked most was any emotion. It was just one scene after another, filled with generic sex acts. The sissy hubby didn't come across as eager or reluctant, or excited or ashamed. He was blandly did as he was told, without a word of complaint. It felt like his situation was supposed to be humiliating, but even the forced feminization element was as simple as meekly doing as he's told.